Tuesday 19 June 2018
100 wc
hi, again guys, this is my 100-word challenge but it is not 100 words it is actually 141 words. hope you enjoy ๐
“Bedtime girls,” my mum called from down the hallway.
“Ok Mum,” we yelled back. Flick the light switch off, into our sleeping bags, and start snoring.
In the middle of the night, I was woken by rustling in the fridge. “Bethany is that y- you,” I said waking up. No reply. I decide to get up and see for myself.
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I love the ending. The fact that Bethany has sleep walked and made a mess in the night is cleverly written , without you actually describing what she has done. We have to infer and paint a picture ourselves,
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