Sammie was stuck at home, alone, with the chicken pox.
“ I can’t believe it ” Sammie choked through her swollen throat, “ I am sick, and no one is here to look after me. ”
Just then, Sammie heard a knock , Sammie jumped to her feet and opened the door. It was her twin sister, Maggie. “ Maggie what are you doing here,” Sammie said surprised
“ I am here to take your picture for the school press, and to get some HELP!!,” Maggie said quickly
“Why?,” Sammie questions
“Well you know our art teacher Mr Consoppilos” Maggie said slowly
“Yes, what about him” Sammie questioned
“Well he brought his art robot to school today, and it kind of went out of control” Maggie said even slower
“Well what are you waiting for, let's go stop that robot.” Sammie said full of energy. (even though she was sick.)
When they got to school it was like a tornado just hit the art classroom. “So how do we exactly turn this thing off .”
Well the robot took the remote so you have to get it to say control-alt-delete-5-6-7 .”
“Ok” said Sammie confused
Sammie and Maggie didn’t know what they were going to do but they knew that it was their job…
To be continued...
The opening paragraph is excellent. I love the way you share what's wrong with Sammie.
ReplyDeleteGreat punctuation... and setting out of conversation.
I love this Story, the opening paragraph really hooks the reader in. I cant wait to find out what happens.
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