Hey, again people. This week the 100wc is a photo 
I don't really have a name for it yet... so let's call it STORY
I sat there, looking, staring, studying, wondering. What was it? Why was it there? Who made it? Then, I remembered the tale, the nursery tale. It goes a bit like this.
I don't really have a name for it yet... so let's call it STORY
I sat there, looking, staring, studying, wondering. What was it? Why was it there? Who made it? Then, I remembered the tale, the nursery tale. It goes a bit like this.
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Once upon a time in a land not too far from the one your all thinking of, a tornado was ripping through Rivertown, destroying every. single. thing. in, its, path. Homes were destroyed, people were killed and everything that little town treasured was gone.
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During the rebuilding, the people of Riverbridge built that statue in remembrance for all that little town of Riverbridge went through.
the end
I love your beginning. It really hooks me in. Joining four similar meaning words together really adds impact... "looking, staring, studying, wondering." I assume you broke the rules about punctuation on purpose... "every. single. thing. in, its, path." But it was very effective.
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