This week we got to do any 100wc we wanted to. So I flicked back a choose this one Leopard Tennis Shop Purple Grabbed. Can you guess how many words?
I grabbed my keys and walked to my car. I was off to the river bridge purple shop to get my bestie Lulu a birthday present, but when I got there Lulu was there waiting for me. I knew she would track me down, she always does.
Lulu and I first met in a professional dog grooming competition. She came up to me and took my good luck charm it was a leopard print purple tennis racket. After I convinced her to give it back, we started talking. We found we had so much in common so we became best friends.
Now that I think about it I don't need to buy her anything. I have the perfect gift right here in my pocket.
Hello Pyper, I'm Gemma from Whangaparaoa school. I thought your story was really good. You had good punctuation and sentences. You should maybe add some pictures or videos in your story. Otherwise known as a DLO in our school. A DLO Is A (digital Learning Object). We are reading your class blog this year and giving you FeedForward and FeedBack.
Hello Pyper, I'm Gemma from Whangaparaoa school.
ReplyDeleteI thought your story was really good. You had good punctuation and sentences. You should maybe add some pictures or videos in your story. Otherwise known as a DLO in our school. A DLO Is A (digital Learning Object). We are reading your class blog this year and giving you FeedForward and FeedBack.