Tuesday, 21 March 2017

my summer poem



That was summer

Remember Cold mint chocolate ice cream melting in my mouth as I take a bite

Remember Buzzing bees flying from flower to flower collecting gooey honey for the hive.

That was summer

Remember luscious green grass being squashed as I run around.

Remember the huge blow-up beach ball being thrown around the giant waves.

That was summer

Remember stuffing your face with the giant strawberry from the fridge

That was summer










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3 comments:

  1. Philiprip21 March 2017 at 22:33

    Well done. You have some great summer images. I like the way you have activated the nouns.

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  2. Anonymous27 March 2017 at 16:37

    Some beautiful adjectives Pyper (e.g. luscious and gooey)

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  3. Fi10 May 2017 at 19:13

    I really enjoyed those summery feelings that your writing made me feel. Love it. The phrase "blow up beach ball" makes me feel that light feeling of fun. Great writing.

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